.Compose Design Advocate.
Pages 196~197
From these seven introductions I liked the one that refers to our world as becoming this “ecological wasteland”. For me, this introduction captured my attention the best because it had me imagine something and was something that I felt strongly about. It asked questions, which made me feel like the author was talking to me through his piece of writing. Jared Yach’s introduction stood out the most for me
because this is a real issue on our earth. I believe that Jared Yach has developed a very strong ethos through this introduction. In just the beginning of this writing I can tell that he is trying to convey something that is very important to him and others. It is apparent that he is trying to grasp the audience’s attention by discussing something that affects everyone. In just the beginning of his writing he has been able to set up a relationship between the audience and himself. The subject, in which he is writing about, is very powerful and each and every reader it can relate. Through his tone it is obvious that he is speaking of an important issue that addresses everyone who reads this piece. I feel that through Yach’s writing I am being told something that I need to share with others because we are taking our world and our economy for granted. People are using our resources without end… The author talks of an isolated and depressing place with forests that have no trees, water that is poisoned and 
air that is filled with pollution and various toxins…This could in reality, be our earth at one point. From the introduction, I expect this paper to be about global warming, dependence of our resources, harm of wildlife and other topics that have to do with the negative choices we make that affect our earth. We rely far too much on the resources that we have today and from that, we are harming not only our earth, but everything that comes with it, as well.
Pages 196~197
From these seven introductions I liked the one that refers to our world as becoming this “ecological wasteland”. For me, this introduction captured my attention the best because it had me imagine something and was something that I felt strongly about. It asked questions, which made me feel like the author was talking to me through his piece of writing. Jared Yach’s introduction stood out the most for me
because this is a real issue on our earth. I believe that Jared Yach has developed a very strong ethos through this introduction. In just the beginning of this writing I can tell that he is trying to convey something that is very important to him and others. It is apparent that he is trying to grasp the audience’s attention by discussing something that affects everyone. In just the beginning of his writing he has been able to set up a relationship between the audience and himself. The subject, in which he is writing about, is very powerful and each and every reader it can relate. Through his tone it is obvious that he is speaking of an important issue that addresses everyone who reads this piece. I feel that through Yach’s writing I am being told something that I need to share with others because we are taking our world and our economy for granted. People are using our resources without end… The author talks of an isolated and depressing place with forests that have no trees, water that is poisoned and 
air that is filled with pollution and various toxins…This could in reality, be our earth at one point. From the introduction, I expect this paper to be about global warming, dependence of our resources, harm of wildlife and other topics that have to do with the negative choices we make that affect our earth. We rely far too much on the resources that we have today and from that, we are harming not only our earth, but everything that comes with it, as well.
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